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So chapter 27 of The Way Wars Are Won has been kicking my ass for the past 6 (SIX!) months. I’m serious. Since November 17th, I’ve barely written anything and I just couldn’t bring myself to rewrite the whole chapter. Finally, on Tuesday, I grabbed all my papers involving chapter 27, printed out all the different versions (I have 3 versions of this one scene–it’s ridiculous) and spread them out on the floor.

Items needed:

  • Paper
  • Pens
  • Highlighters
  • Post-its

I used the highlighters to really see the different scenes in the original chap 27. Then I summarized each scene onto a post-it. With that outline, I compared versions and picked which pieces I’d be using. Kinda like a puzzle. Now I just (ha–JUST) need to type it all up. Of course it’ll still be a mess, but it won’t be as much of a mess as it was. So it’ll be an improvement.

Word count: Who the hell knows? Maybe I will tomorrow.

Quote from “Sixteen Candles”.

Moving on to now to the first blog post since the 30th of November 2010. (Favorites in bold)

Movies I’ve seen since I last blogged

Gran Torino
Zodiac
Rocky
Case 39
The Sorcerer’s Apprentice
The A Team
Survival of the Dead
Le Pere Noel est un Ordure
Australia
Lakeview Terrace
Grosse Pointe Blank
National Lampoon’s Christmas Vacation
The Disappearance of Alice Creed
The Expendables
Serenity
Eagle Eye
Disturbia
Doom
Two Days in Paris
Basic Instinct
Duck Soup
The Duchess
American Graffiti
Daybreakers
Planet of the Apes
Carrie
Resident Evil: Afterlife
The Big Lebowski
Full Metal Jacket
Queen of the Damned
The Incredible Hulk
Salt
The Runaways
Cry-Baby
Lolita
When Harry Met Sally
Napoleon Dynamite
Braveheart
2001: A Space Odyssey
Despicable Me
The Killer Inside Me
The Taking of Pelham 123
Nine Dead
From Paris With Love
Veronika Decides to Die
Dorian Gray
Legion
Color Me Kubrick
Easy A
Groundhog Day
Ten Inch Hero
Shock Treatment
Scusa ma ti chiamo amore
Winter’s Bone
Repo! The Genetic Opera
Sixteen Candles
Le roi de coeur
Vilaine
Star Wars: Episode IV—A New Hope
Star Wars: Episode V—The Empire Strikes Back
Star Wars: Episode VI—Return of the Jedi
Chocolat
King Ralph
Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom
Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade
The Circle
Le Herisson
Beautiful Creatures
Catholic Boys

Books

Last Sacrifice by Richelle Mead
Wake by Lisa McMann
Fade by Lisa McMann
Fight Club by Chuck Palahniuk (now that I’ve read the book, I can say that the movie is a PERFECT adaptation)
The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger
Beauty by Robin McKinley
The Mayor of Casterbridge by Thomas Hardy
Fire by Kristin Cashore (even better than her first book “Graceling”)
Going Bovine by Libba Bray
Room by Emma Donoghue (wow)
XVI by Julia Karr
As You Wish by Jackson Pearce
The Carbon Diaries: 2017 by Saci Lloyds
Choke by Chuch Palahniuk

TV Shows

Lost season 6 (finally!)
Scrubs season 9
IT Crowd seasons 1 to 4
Firefly (WATCH IT NOW!)
Supernatural season 5
Dollhouse season 1 and 2
Spartacus: Blood and Sand season 1
The Guild seasons 1 to 4 (created by Felicia Day who played Vi on BTVS in season 7)
Heroes season 4
Misfits seasons 1 and 2
Xena: the Warrior Princess (Now on season 2–it gets MUCH better after that cheesy first episode…)
Glee seasons 1 and 2 (I LOVE it!)

*****

Now that’s done, we’ll move on to answering this question: Why haven’t I blogged in so long?

Mainly, school. Between long school hours, homework, stressful exams, a huge school project, a trip to Italy (!!) and then my Italian correspondent staying at my place for a week, I haven’t been able to write, let alone blog. And soon I’ll be revising for 4 exams: the CPE (Cambridge Proficiency Exam–I need it as a proof that I speak English for unis), the Maths Bac, French Bac (in 2 parts), Physics-Chemistry/Science Bac.

Now I’m going to write a blog post about writing.

Huge blog post of craziness

The second week of NaNoWriMo 2010

  • Monday 8th: 516
  • Tuesday 9th: 1002
  • Wednesday 10th: 305
  • Thursday 11th: 1719
  • Friday 12th: 103
  • Saturday 13th: 162
  • Sunday 14th: 939

Total for week 2:

Current NaNoWriMo total:

Total for novel:

Total NaNo-fail, I know. A mix of school, being sick, having homework and plain ol’ procrastinating got in the way of writing. Also: a problem in chapter 27 that I haven’t been able to overcome. Last day I wrote: Wednesday the 17th of November. And thar was 79 words. FAIL.

But tomorrow morning, I might get up an hour early and write. And I’ve done some homework in advance. *GASP!* I almost NEVER do that.

Movies

  • Bandslam: MUCH better than I expected. What I expected was a cliche-ridden film. I expected the nerdy boy to fall for the bitchy girl and not realize that the quiet outcast was THE ONE for him. I expected stereotypical characters and stupid insults. Guess what? There was only one cliche (that I noticed anyway) throughout the entire movie. And it was a small one. Most surprising part? Almost crying. This movie really seemed like a typical Disney movie. And later, I looked it up on IMDB. Turns out they advertised it by comparing it to High School Musical. That’s exactly what I thought it was going to be like. But that was based on the DVD cover alone. Okay, I’m rambling…
  • A Sound of Thunder: Not a fantastic, brilliant, genius movie, but it was entertaining. And I love that whole “survival” aspect. If you ignore the obvious plot holes, it’s entertaining. Or you can make fun of them, like my sister and I did.
  • Tout ce qui brille: French movie. Sad/funny. The thing I hated the most was seeing this one character pretend to be someone else, all to fit it with rich people. Rich people who didn’t even give a shit about their own kids. And the other main character who DOESN’T do that still pissed me off with some of the things she did. Do not recommend.
  • The Condemned: Kinda like “A Sound of Thunder”: not brilliant, but it’s entertaining. As long as you don’t mind violence that is.
  • Nicotina: Mexican movie. Very similar to Pulp Fiction–characters, dialogue, plot. I liked it.
  • Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (part 1): Being a HUGE HP fan, I SHOULD write a whole post about it, but it’s late. For now I’ll say this: HP7 part 1 surprised me. It was dark, sad, funny, and a 1000 times better than the previous 6 movies. I only hated one scene in the movie: when Ron explains how he found Harry and Hermione, with the ball of light from the deluminator, I found it cheesy/corny/sentimental. Totally unlike Ron. And the music didn’t help either. Apart from that scene, I am VERY pleased with it. And is it just me or was Daniel Radcliffe much funnier in this movie?
  • Simone: Okay, I’m too tired to think of anything to say about this movie. Average. Some funny moments. Definitely the worst out of the 7 movies on this list of movies I’ve recently seen. You’ll be fine if you don’t see this.

Books (this is gonna be short–I have to go to bed SOON)

  • Alpha by Rachel Vincent: Last book in Shifter series. Loved it. Cried. Averagely happy with ending. Want more.
  • Break by Hannah Moskowitz: Devoured it in one day. I was half-happy with the ending (though a lot of people HATED it), the writing could have been better, but she was only 17 or so at time of writing it. Her blog and the excerpts of her new novels she posts show that her writing has improved. (She’s now 19.) I intend to buy all of her books.
  • Fallout by Ellen Hopkins: Last book in trilogy. Loved it. Also devoured it. Very happy. (I own ALL of Ellen Hopkins’ books.)
  • Succubus Blues by Richelle Mead: While I enjoyed reading it, and I definitely want to read the rest of the books in the series, I don’t desperately NEED the next book NOW. Very funny, though. Very interesting to see what writers look/are like to non-writers. Made for some funny scenes.
  • Perfect Chemistry by Simone Elkeles: Some of the writing/dialogue was corny (like some of Brittany’s inner monologue, or her dialogue. She actually says “I’m completely grossed out!”–seriously?), but I tried to ignore the writing and focus on the story. That was the interesting part. Alex (Mexican) and Brittany (rich white girl) fall in love. At first they hate it each other. Hated that Alex and Brittany judged each other based on where they came from–they both knew better. Brittany knew people thought she was a rich bitch with a perfect life and body and boyfriend–and she knew those people were wrong. Alex knew people thought he was a bad guy, involved in drugs and murder–and he knew those people were wrong. And yet what do they do? They judge each other. Shouldn’t they know better?

Other

  • School: My grades range from average to good to very good. Only one is really bad. Overall, I’m happy (and surprised) with my grades.
  • Health: My eyesight has declined a little (yes, I wear glasses–I’m nearsighted) so I have to go to the ophthalmologist the 7th of December; I have lordosis (google it) which means I have to go swimming twice a week and see a physical therapist once or twice a week; I have light aquagenic urticaria, but that’s old news (we found OxyHives–homeopathic and it works). Man, I am NOT a very healthy person… The two fingers I burned the other week are healing though. (Why the look of surprise? Did I not mention I burned two fingers last week? I’m pretty sure I mentioned it on Twitter.)

NaNoWriMo — week 1

The first week of NaNoWriMo 2010

  • Monday 1st: 1906
  • Tuesday 2nd: 1752
  • Wednesday 3rd: 142
  • Thursday 4th: 207
  • Friday 5th: 389
  • Saturday 6th: 20
  • Sunday 7th: 535

Total for week 1:

 

Current NaNoWriMo total:

 

Total for novel:

 

As you can see on the right, most of the people in my NaNoWriMo support group are doing much better than me. But I vow to catch up by this Sunday, where the expected word count is 23 338 words. *gulp* I can do it?

Muriel’s Wedding

Oh. My. God. That movie was amzing. The characters were all so different and fascinating. It was funny, sad, dark. Muriel was at first annoying and you just wanted to yell at her and tell her to grow up, to DO something. But then she does do something–and she changes. By the end of the movie, Muriel is 1000 times more awesome.

I’d say a lot more, but it’s 1 am and I have to shower. BUT I want to add that I’ve noticed movies released in 1994, coincidentally the year I was born in, are awesome. Pulp Fiction, Muriel’s Wedding, The Adventures of Priscilla Queen of the Desert, Interview with the Vampire, Little Women, The Little Rascals (which I LOVED as a kid), Frankenstein (with Kenneth Branagh and Helena Bonham Carter), Thumbelina (another favorite when I was a kid) and the last Freddy movie (awesome series which led to my sister and I often quoting this line “Let’s go kick the motherfucker’s ass all over dreamland!”).

Enough evidence?

Despite being in my before last year of lycée, which means lots of homework and exams, I’m doing NaNoWriMo.

What is NaNoWriMo?

First, it stands for “National Novel Writing Month”, but really it’s international. (InNoWriMo just doesn’t have the same effect.)

Second, the goal is to write 50-000 words of a (preferrably new) novel in November. Here’s the site: http://www.nanowrimo.org

Third—*SCREAMS* It starts in less than 5 hours!!!!!

I’m insane. Why? Why am I insane this year but wasn’t insane last year? Because last year, technically, I cheated. I used NaNo as a way to finish writing a novel. BUT I did write 6700 words on the last day. I did NOT, however, write 50 000 words in 30 days. This year, I WILL be doing that. I’ll be finishing The Way Wars Are Won and writing the start of another untitled novel about witches and hell dimensions.

List of things I have for NaNoWriMo

  • Notebooks
  • Pens
  • The almighty Internet and even almightier iMac
  • A special NaNoWriMo 1 GB USB key to back up everything I write
  • A special NaNoWriMo word count spreadsheet (linky — download and modify spreadsheet as needed (I checked—you don’t need to sign/have an account to download it))
  • A special NaNoWriMo folder
  • Some outlining for untitled novel and research about Swedish deities
  • A support group composed of www.twitter.com/aekubo, www.twitter.com/nlmars and www.twitter.com/need_tea. We shall e-mail each other, talk on Chatzy, share our writing through Google Docs and keep each other sane. More or less.

Add me as a buddy if you want: http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/603186

“What the shit!”

That is a quote from the Matrix, which I rewatched with a friend who HAD NEVER SEEN IT BEFORE.

Now, what else have I seen recently?

  • The Invasion: As a Washington psychiatrist unearths the origin of an alien epidemic, she also discovers her son might be the only way it can be stopped. Wow. Although I’m not too happy with the ending, it was amazing.
  • A Knight’s Tale: After his master dies, a peasant squire, fueled by his desire for food and glory, creates a new identity for himself as a knight. *happy smile* Ah, Heath Ledger… And Paul Bettany as Geoffrey Chaucer was awesome! Very funny. “You’ve waited your whole life for Sir Ector to shite himself to death?”
  • Iron Man 2: Because of his superhero alter ego, Tony Stark must contend with deadly issues involving the government, his own friends and new enemies. Awesomely funny movie. The technology is this one is even cooler than the first and I love the constant arguing between Tony Stark and Pepper Potts and the way their dialogue overlaps. Very cool movie and I canNOT wait for the third one.
  • (500) Days of Summer: An offbeat romantic comedy about a woman who doesn’t believe true love exists, and the young man who falls for her. Oh my God! Joseph Gordon-Levitt is gorgeous in this and the character he plays is so SWEET. Loved it!
  • Kick-Ass: Dave Lizewski is an unnoticed high school student and comic book fan who one day decides to become a super-hero, even though he has no powers, training or meaningful reason to do so. This movie blew my mind. After watching the trailer, I had a certain vision of what the movie would be like. It was nothing like that vision—in a VERY good way. It spared no punches (tried to Google that expression, see if that’s correct but I couldn’t find anything). Now normally in movies, no matter how evil the bad guy is, he/she would NEVER get into a violent fight with an eleven year old girl. At least they would hesitate (maybe not if they’re sadists, but when they’re bad, they’re usually not THAT bad). All in all, awesome movie.
  • I’m convinced I’ve seen another movie, or two, but I can’t remember, so maybe not…
  • Ugh. I’m such an idiot! ROBIN HOOD! I saw Robin Hood!
  • Robin Hood (2010): In 13th century England, Robin and his band of marauders confront corruption in a local village and lead an uprising against the crown that will forever alter the balance of world power. Liked the movie. Loved Little John.

I’ve also been reading:

Graceling by Kristin Cashore

Gracelings are people born with an extreme talent, known as a Grace. Rare enough to be unusual, they are feared for their difference and often exploited for their skill. They can be picked out by the fact that they have two different-colored eyes.

Katsa, the protagonist, has been able to kill people with her bare hands since she was eight and is famous within the seven kingdoms for the violent acts she carries out on behalf of her uncle, King Randa. As of late, she has struggled to reconcile her conscience with these acts, but rather than challenge her uncle’s authority over her, she seeks to employ less debilitating attack strategies and build up a clandestine organization that promotes justice over cruelty and abuses of power. During the course of a secret mission, she meets Po, another Graced fighter and the first person to come close to matching her skill. A bond forms between the two that causes each to discover startling truths about themselves, the other, and the kingdoms.

I don’t even know where to begin. Maybe with Kristin Cashore’s genius. She’s such a good writer that because Katsa hadn’t realized a certain character was in love with her, I hadn’t realized it either. That’s just amazing. And because Katsa thinks her uncle, the King Randa, has complete power over her, I thought it, too, until Po pointed out that Randa didn’t, that Katsa could leave anytime she wanted to.

I loved seeing Katsa and Po’s relationship develop, and the few romantic moments between them are SO sweet. Indeed, the romance isn’t the main focus of the novel. Po’s grandfather has been kidnapped, and they need to find out by who and why. Along the way, Katsa changes from a “brute” (that what she thinks she is) who doesn’t have many friends into someone who cares about others, and it’s a gradual, natural change.

What else can I say about this book?

OH! The one thing that REALLY bugged me is the fact that Kristin Cashore started sentences with “Well, and” about 20 times throughout the book. It’s weird, and only once did it makes sense.

Doesn’t this sound weird to you: “Well, and that was answered.” ?

It sounds so…off.

Apart from that, I LOVED it and I was so disappointed when I reached the end of the book. I want MORE.

Snuff by Chuck Palahniuk

Cassie Wright, porn priestess, intends to cap her legendary career by breaking the world record for serial fornication porn movies, on camera, with six hundred men. Snuff unfolds through the perspectives of Mr. 600, Mr. 72, Mr. 137, and Wright’s personal assistant, Sheila. With his satirical narrative and thorough research, Chuck Palahniuk reveals through these four characters the little-known facts and histories of not only pornography and sexual deviance, but also acting and life in and out of the spotlight, and throughout the novel shows the rarely acknowledged presence of pornography in modern America.

Wow. First Chuck Palahniuk book I’ve ever read and man is it strange, crude and weird. And there’s a twist I thought I figured out, but didn’t, which was a nice surprise. Gotta say, Snuff is NOT for the faint of heart or for the easily grossed out.

The Dust of 100 Dogs by A.S. King

Pirates. Love. Adventure. Loss.

In the late seventeenth century, famed teenage pirate Emer Morrisey was on the cusp of escaping the pirate life with her one true love and unfathomable riches when she was slain and cursed with “the dust of one hundred dogs,” dooming her to one hundred lives as a dog before returning to a human bodywith her memories intact.

Now she’s a contemporary American teenager and all she needs is a shovel and a ride to Jamaica.

Just like Kick-Ass, it surprised me by not being what I expected. And just like Kick-Ass, this was a good thing. The best parts were the flashbacks to Emer Morrisey’s life—she goes from being a poor, Irish girl to a feared pirate who murders and steals. Awesome book. And I saw Saffron and Emer as being the same person, which apparently they are not.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Out of all the books and movies, the titles of ones I think are the best are in red.

Bringing Back Vivian

Note: Yes, I should be in bed. It’s ten past four in the morning, but I just HAD to post this now. :)

This short story is a prequel to the untitled novel about witches that I’ll start writing during NaNoWriMo. It takes place in 2006 and is told from Caitlin’s POV. Caitlin is 15, Vivian and Olivia are 17. The novel itself starts in 2010, when Caitlin is 19.

Olivia is insane if she thinks I’m going to let her do this. If anything goes wrong, who knows what could happen? She could die, she could set fire to the forest, or I could die because I’ll be hidden behind a tree, watching her perform her most dangerous spell yet.

Well, second most dangerous spell yet.

Olivia has reached the place where Vivian disappeared a year ago today. I hide behind a large tree and consider my options. I could tell her it’s a bad idea, but she wouldn’t listen. I could use my magic to stop her, but with the way her magic has taken over her, she’d have no problem getting rid of me. I’m a fly compared to her.

My best bet would probably be to pick up a rock and knock her out.

And then she’d wake up and kick my ass.

I sigh. I can’t even call Mom and Dad—they’ll think I’m insane if I start talking about magic, spells and opening portals to alternate dimensions.

“I know you’re there,” Olivia says.

Damn. I reveal myself and Olivia is crouched down, arranging sticks and stones into a circle for the portal. “Then you know I think this is bad idea.”

“And you know you can’t stop me, so go back home. I don’t want you here.” She stands up, pulls a knife from her pocket and turns to face me. “I mean it, Caitlin. This is dangerous.”

“Exactly,” I say. “I refuse to let you do this—what if you die? What if the portal sucks you up? Have you even considered the consequences?”

She purses her lips. “I can’t leave her there. She’s already spent a year there, which could be a hundred years for her. And I don’t even know what’s in that dimension. It could be hell.”

“And it just as well could be…a nice alternate dimension.”

Olivia shakes her head. “The spell I was doing wasn’t going to open a nice dimension.” She turns her back to me, and I know it’s because she’s about to cry. “I have to save her. Go home.”

“No. If you’re really going to do this, then I’m going to help you. My magic might not be as powerful as yours, but it could help.”

“I’m sorry,” she says before turning around and muttering, “Cogo.”

Green goo shoots from her hands and pushes me back, ties me to a tree. I struggle and say, “Don’t do this.” I draw the magic from deep inside me and force it through the skin on my arms—it fizzes against the goo, but doesn’t burn it like acid and free me, like I’d hoped it would.

“You’re right, I should send you home.” She waves a hand and the goo vanishes. She says, “Transporto” and I’m back in my room.

I almost shout, but I can’t risk waking up Mom and Dad.

Dammit. She knows I can’t do teleportation spells, and I don’t have enough time to get back there by foot before she starts the spell. And shit. My bike is in the forest. If only I were a year older, and was daring enough to steal the Dad’s car keys.

Okay, Caitlin: think. First option: go to bed, pretend you have no idea your sister is opening a portal to an alternate dimension. Second option: learn a teleportation spell and teleport to the forest to… To do what? I can’t stop her.

But I can bring a first-aid kit, because I’m sure she doesn’t have one. Olivia probably thinks she can heal herself with a spell, but opening a portal will leave her weak.

I rub my face—how can someone two years older than me be so stupid? I mean does she really think she’s powerful enough to pull it off on her own?

I go to Olivia’s room and head for her desk. I turn her desk lamp on, open the last drawer, remove the false bottom and pull out her spellbook. I flip the pages until I find the spell I need. Olivia only needed to say “Send” in Latin to teleport me home, but the first time you need to carve the most complicated symbol into the palm of your hand.

If I do it correctly, it’ll heal when I’ve teleported. If not… I check the book. Well that’s reassuring. They don’t say what can go wrong.

I’m running out of time, so I put the book on her desk and go fetch my personal spell knife as well as the first-aid kit. “Mundo,” I say and my knife is clean.

I open the book to the right page and put a paperweight to keep it open. Gripping the knife in my left hand, I take a deep breath. This has to be perfect.

The knife pierces my skin. “Ow.” But I keep going. And I whimper the entire time.

When I’m finally done, I put my knife into its sheath and take a deep breath. I can do this—this will not go wrong.

I press the palm of my bloody hand on the skin above my heart, grab the first-aid kit with my left and say, “Silva transporto.”

It works, but I’m far from Olivia. I can’t even feel the magic of her spell. I take a second to check my palm—completely healed—and start running.

When I reach Olivia, her back faces me and she’s a shadow surrounded by a white light. Roots are wrapped around her wrists and though I can’t see it, I know there’s blood on the grass.

“Stop,” I yell and keep running, only to be thrown back by some sort of forcefield. “No!”

I get my knife out and stab it through the forcefield—it bends my knife in half. Dammit. I hit the forcefield with my hands. “Olivia, stop the spell, now.”

She keeps chanting. The ground shakes and I fall backwards. I get up. “How do you even know it’s the right dimension?”

She ignores me, her head hung low, still chanting. Or maybe she can’t even hear me.

Then she screams.

“Olivia? What’s going on, Liv?”

I’m frozen. Drops of blood, Olivia’s no doubt, are suspended in the air. The only sound is the portal ripping open—it’s the fabric of reality tearing.

Then I come to my senses. “Olivia, stop it now! Please.” I hit the forcefield, kick it, bash tree-branches against it. Nothing. “Please.” I sink to my knees and gasp.

The ground trembles.

I stand, wrap my arms around a tree and, as the portal is shrieking open, I yell, “Please, it’s not too late! You can still close it.”

My heart speeds up when Liv turns around—her face illuminated by the magic has never looked so dark: dilated pupils, veins standing out and sweat, or tears, dripping off her face.

“Liv, you’re scaring me…” Tears form and fall thick and fast.

“I have to save her,” she says. She turns back to the portal, finishes the spell and waits.

The portal is the size of a door and on the other side is a vast, reddish landscape. People, or demons, move around, then one spots Olivia and comes charging towards the portal.

She chants again and I hear Vivian’s name. But she’ll never be able to locate Vivian—the demon is getting closer with each word she screams at the portal.

The demon and Vivian appear at the same time.

Olivia pulls Vivian out, back into our dimension, and the demon pulls Olivia in.

“No!”

The portal closes.

“What happened?” Vivian says, then collapses.

Olivia is gone.

“I don’t know,” I whisper. “I don’t know.”

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